Azatulah 10-5-7-10-10

LI: To use the 10-5-7-10-10 strategy to write a story

Goal | Mount Rumble

Early in the morning right before the sunrise, Anna got ready to rock climb the most steepest mountain she had ever seen, Mount Rumble. ‘Today is the big day’. It had been her goal to climb the mountain for her whole entire life. It was breathtaking but she gained up her courage and started to climb the treacherous mountain. ‘Here we go’ said Anna. She was doing great!

She had already climbed a quarter of the mountain. ‘I'm so thirsty, my legs and arms are aching!’ said Anna. But she continued to climb the mountain. She started to doubt herself but right before she was gonna give up, the sun bloomed out from behind the other mountain and shinied in her eye. The light of the sun gave her courage to continue climbing and achieve her goal. She had now climbed a third of the mountain. She stared at the scenery, an orange, red and yellow gradient. The sky was full of a glowing linear dodge effect. ‘Only a little bit left to fulfil my goal!’ mentioned Anna. A few minutes later Anna finally reached the top of Mount Rumble.

She took her water bottle out and chugged the whole bottle. Anna’s legs were super tired due to the climbing she did. She took her camera out and took pictures of the sunset. She took her flag and put it in the mountain to show that she had climbed it.

THE END

Today for writing we were learning how to use the 10-5-7-10-10 strategy to write a story. The numbers are based of minutes. 10=Plan 5=Write 7=Talk about it 10=Write 10=Draft & Discuss. This strategy is easier then the 5-7-10 strategy because it gives us more time to write and also gives time for us to plan our story out.