Thursday 23 July 2020

Azatulah 5-7-10

LI: To use the 5-7-10 strategy to write story's Lighting never strikes twice, does it?


That was the question that occupied their frightened minds as they crouched, huddling together, next to the pile of dusty sacks in the base of the windmill. Non stop thinking about what could happen, they quickly realised that the windmill is a conductor for the lightning. Standing far away from the storm as possible.


Afraid that they could get in contact with the storm and get seriously injured. Scared for their lives they thought about how the storm got there. ‘We could get seriously burnt if we get struck’ said the twins.


As the storm calmed down the twins felt more safe. ‘What should we do now?’ said the first twin. The second twin gained up the courage to go out and check if it was safe. The twin walked out of the windmill safely, right before he was about to confirm the safety of their lives, a huge lightning bolt struck the top of the windmill causing a fire. ‘QUICK, GET OUT! THERE'S A FIRE ON TOP OF THE WINDMILL’.



‘We should have never come here!’ said the first twin. ‘No time to think about the past!’ said the second twin. ‘Let's get back home before the fire spreads’. The twins ran home and told their parents all about the experience. Their parents contacted the fire department and told them about the fire, the fire department went to the case and put the fire out. 


The End LS2 used the 5-7-10 strategy to write a story about a thunderstorm near a windmill. This was fun because it was tempting.


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